Recommended for: Anyone looking for a different style of writing.
Read from May 26 to 29, 2013 — I own a copy, read count: 1
As an aspiring writer, I know how difficult it is to write anything. So I will be tough but fair in reviewing it.
The author captured the disjointed feeling of dreams better than I have read anywhere else. This was well done, most dream sequences in books read as if they were real, which is not how dreams feel. The idea was interesting, bordering on cyberpunk. However, there were some minor grammar issues in the narration - grammar check strikes again. This is only a issue with the grammar police - since I've seen similar issues in big budget books that should have a team of grammar wizards working on it. The only other item that bothered me (a little) was the over use of the work "smirk". Maybe that was the only way Mark (the protagonist) could smile.
It was an interesting read (and quick). Overall, a good read. I look forward to future works to see what new ideas come to light
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